Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response
WWW: Your
editing skills are really very good here – lots to credit. Excellent continuity
editing, clear narrative communicated, and an attempt at a pack product during
the advert. The choice of location and character in your advert linked to the
target audience for this project.
EBI: The
preliminary exercise advert length was between 30-40 seconds and yours is well
over, not a problem for our real coursework but ensure you meet the minimum
requirements. In terms of the editing, the main feedback from this
project is the audio ensure that you edit when someone is counting down the
shot. Consider also using non-diegetic sound such as an audio track or
voiceover which is a requirement of the coursework. Although I like the ending
where your slogan is on the screen, I think the choice of typography needs
changing.
LR: As your
learner response, write what you are planning to make for your real coursework.
Will you choose to make the 2 video adverts or 3 print adverts? Explain your
decision.
2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write two WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and two EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise.
WWW (What Went Well):
Your editing skills are impressive, showcasing excellent continuity and a clear narrative that effectively communicates your message. The choice of location and character aligns well with the target audience, enhancing the overall impact of the advert.
EBI (Even Better If):
While your advert exceeds the recommended length of 30-40 seconds, this isn't an issue for the final coursework, but be mindful of minimum requirements moving forward. In terms of audio, pay attention to editing during the countdown for shots, and consider incorporating non-diegetic sound like an audio track or voiceover, as this is essential for the coursework. Although the ending with your slogan is effective, a change in typography would enhance its visual appeal.
3) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List three things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be specific.
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