Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response
WWW: Your editing skills are really very good here – lots to credit. Excellent continuity editing, clear narrative communicated, and an attempt at a pack product during the advert. The choice of location and character in your advert linked to the target audience for this project. EBI: The preliminary exercise advert length was between 30-40 seconds and yours is well over, not a problem for our real coursework but ensure you meet the minimum requirements. In terms of the editing, the main feedback from this project is the audio ensure that you edit when someone is counting down the shot. Consider also using non-diegetic sound such as an audio track or voiceover which is a requirement of the coursework. Although I like the ending where your slogan is on the screen, I think the choice of typography needs changing. LR: As your learner response, write what you are planning to make for your real coursework. Will you choose to make the 2 video adverts or 3 print adverts? Explain your d